Sure, for one, capitalize the first letter in every word of the title "Ocean Blue", then capitalize the beggining of every sentence and every stanza, also capitalize the i's, but other than that this tis a wonderful poem, 5/5 for effort!!!

Aww nice poem.i'll like to get married next to the ocean blue =].

This poem was so sweet. it made me smile. You have a great talent. And I'm not gonna lie, I might have had that dream about that special someone too. Lol. Very nice poem. Never stop writing. 5/5

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I love your poem The Ocean Blue , I do really wish I was the one sharing that dream with you,but one day you just never know ,I do hope all your dreams and wishes come true with who ever you may choose to share them with 5/5 Steve xx

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Awww really sweet well done, was this just a poem or an actual dream babe?

So sweet.
Loved reading it.
Hope your dreams come true.
Take care

Wow! Amazing! The funny thing is, when I first started reading this poem it didn't seem to me like it was going to flow or even rhyme, but you did a great job! 5/5 but the stanza before the last sounds a bit forced.

Good job! :)

Word's flow from a talented writter, and paint a beautiful picture within my head.

This peice was amazing.
Happiness just seeped from this peice.
It really show's off your talent,
Keep it up,
Elaine.

This piece is truely beautiful. So expressive and effectively penned. The flow and the emotions seem very real :)

My eyes met yours
And I was a prisoner in your hold

The best lines in this piece 5/5
Tc

That would be a great dream. The flow was reall great.

Your such an awesome writer, Bree! My idol :)