Darkness

You are my best friend.
And, it was alright.
You should add to it,
Make that a stanza in a longer poem with depth and persistence about this person, Yea?

I was expecting more with this one.
I really don't know what to say..
Overall Rating: 3.5/5

Anna,
Short, but I can understand the meaning of how you dedicated it to Domain Drioge. I think that this poem could be extremely well done if you made it just a little longer though. You don't have to, but that's just an idea.
Keep it up, probably a 3/5 though

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and rate one of my poems? Thanks! ^.-

Short but sweet 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Short but good xx