Stanzas, maybe?
I'm not sure, the flow was off. And, I don't like cutting/suicidal poems.
Even though the ending wasn't so much, the beginning was and it threw me off.
Well, It's a good poem, with a good chance.
Just, needs some work I believe.

Great Emotion, btw.

Wow u have a wonderful way with words:D....u have such deep emotions and this was a wonderful and deep poem:d
keep up the gr8 writes:D
tk care

The wording was awesome, if you seprated lines into stanzas I think it might be easier for some people to follow, other than that this was perfectly written. deep emotion, and clear message, and vivd imagery. 5/5

I liked this one very much. i know the feeling. i can feel the hurt through the whole poem.. i rate this a 5

Whoa. Powerfull =| Nice flow, it really read good. =] I like this line: An artificial laugh, a smile oh so fake.
It really shows how you feel.
5/5 again ^^

I can relate 5 it was emotion comment rate back

I like this i can really feel your pain and i can completly relate to this one i mean if you want you can go read some of my dark poems and you will see that i know what you are feeling but this was a really good poem tho i mean wow i might just add you to my favorites for this one!

Powerful poem....i loved it! Very deep and i can relate to it alot....i could feel the pain as i read it....awesome work! 5/5