This is a great poem...and very true....

one thing i didnt like is how you kept repeating the word poetry...it kinda threw me off a little...maybe it was just me but i dont know...it was still a good poem though.

Yeah it was true,i mean everything you said here are true. I enjoy reading this because this one is unique and the flow is nice.

This was a very neat poem.. i senced the calm feeling of just writing. not about one certain feeling.. very nice

Lol, write a poem about poems/poetry, how original =] I like how you rhymed it.. But I agree about the repitition.. ;] maybe just a little less.

5/5 anywayss =]

Hm, I don't really know how I feel about this one. I like it, don't get me wrong, but as I said in my last comment, repetition annoys me, especially when it's overly used, such as it is here.

You also had some mistakes -

"Suicide,Love, Hate whatever we know its real" -- You need a space after the comma after 'suicide'. And 'its' should be an apostrophe: (it's).

"That beautiful thing that can change someones life" -- 'someone's' -- don't forget the apostrophe!

"From a suicidal poem to a man asking for a wife" -- I don't like the word 'suicidal' coming so soon after you said 'suicide' a few lines up.

Very unique!I love it.I mean everyone on this site should be able to relate to it.*lol*5/5 ^-^

<3Amber

Great, this is a totally different variety. I loved the contrast and descrete style in thi spoem. The ryhthm is great and I loved it in totality. (I think it fits better in misc)

Tc
Fsams

Yes.. that does describe poetry..
you got it ;)
<3 ang

Mika,

The idea that Poetry itself is akin to creation somewhat appealed to me. It's quite wonderful to note how you've brought into play such good insights within a few words. The poem indeed was rather simplistic in nature, whereas to undervalue its simplicity was completely irrelevant. Ridiculous, rather. In any case, the critic's judgment differs from another critic's. I guess.

Nice one, nevertheless.

Take care,
Marian

Now this is where I truely liked the repetition of "Poetry" you used repetition well throughout this entire piece it gave it a nice effoect. The word choice was quite simple I think if you added something more to this it would built up the emotions and portrayed what you are saying with such a stronger tone so to say. The meaning behind this though was great. I did enjoy it to overall again a 4/5 ~mel

I really liked the way you repeated the word poetry it made me get into it more i really enjoyed this one a lot!