Awww!!!!!I love it!!My boyfriend feels the same way about me hurting myself.I love it,love it,love it!!!!5/5^_^

<3Amber

Awww, this poem brought tears.. so sweet of a poem to help a friend.. this flowed nicely and its all around a perfect poem. keep up the good work. u have talent.. and i like ur choice of words.

~Honey, I'm here to tell you,
That its not worth the trouble.
And the more you think it is,
The more the pain will double.~

is my fav lines!!

Awhh this made me cry when you read to me on the phone=[ its really good though and i gave it 5/5. maybe you are right about bobby and i think im actually gonna try...

Honestly i liked the idea of it to show luv for your bestfriend and everything but the ryhming felt forced and the flow was off i would say work on those parts of it all not a bad poem it just felt forced sorry..

Aw, that really touched my heart...its good to know there are friends like you in this world!

Brooke<3