Great poem. I felt like the overall flow could use a little bit of work, but other than that it was awesome.

5.5
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WOW that was very good flow was nice, great choice of words and well written, but it has a twist to it, very nice indeed, love it, a challenge to the mind, great write , keep it up,,,, your friend Tracy d
5/5

Sometimes oblivion is all one craves....especially when one is like the person in this poem......

I loved it, and tracy was right its flow really is smooth. 5/5
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Brandee

Great poem! 5/5! are you buddhist? i noticed your picture on your profile. i think i might be, but i dont know enough about it to consider myself buddhist. i agree with a lot of their teachings, nonetheless.maybe if you are buddhist you can tell me a little more about it.

B.Bridges

Thanks for the comment. i really do love your work! your so creative and inspiring! keep writing. so like, is there a book that has the teachings of buddha that i could look in to???

This is amazing. In some parts it rhymed and others it didnt but it worked so well together. great job!