Excellent!

If thinking about her allows to write like this, bring it on.
You've done this perfectly, well done =)

5/5
*Gem*

Quite good, its very clever the way you have done this, nicely done xx

You show deep feeling here in a creative way. 5/5

Great poem.
Like it, an acrostis with the first letters and the last ones, seems very difficult.
Very emotional too.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Pure skill bruh, this is some complicated stuff man

I really enjoyed this poem and I thought it was very unique, especially the way you spelled the title in the poem. Your 5th line is missing a letter, but none the less an excellent poem 5/5 GG23

This poem is short but still very powerful. It is very deep and it isn't classic love poem which is great. It is original and you described emotions excellently. You wrote this piece with unique, fantastic style. It really deserves 5/5

Nice work and i know that feeling ive found myself writing several about one girl!! anyway nice work and i understand the double acrostic theme now you did very well to make that work!!

WarmH = warmtH soz if that was a delibrate mistake. i dont fully understand the last line but thats because i have the brain of a three year old, i liked your poem though,

This is quite different from the usual poem i read about love and it's clever.. this is nice and sweet coz you dedicate it to someone special.. nice poem

Aww short but sweet alot of people miss judge acrostics and i myself aint a big fan but it works for you
5/5

Wow ..impressive poem...word choice was great.. i really like it. 5/5

Well first of all i think this poem is extremely clever. The rhythm and style is great. The flow is exellent and the words used are mainly perfect and relevent.

I think however the word 'slap' in your line 'Slap me if I unable to bring happinesS' is a bit overt and strong for the style of the poem. Perhaps slay? i dont know just an idea.

I loved the poem though it was amazing well done keep in contact and ill keep reading :D

Nice writing, could you tell me more about acrostic!!! Thx b4!!!

The choosing of words is unique. You need to go over the grammar a little. The subject is your love one I guess, try to right a poem with better rhymes and longer. 4/5

I really liked this poem. I find it quite hard to write Acrostics but you did a great job, and you did it with such ease it seems like. Great Job. I think you deserve a 5/5.

OMG this one is one of the best acrostics I have read and this is not an ordinary one. Im glad that I also have helped you in some way.

Thanks a lot and Hats off!!

5/5
Fsams

This is an amazing piece of poetry. The word choice is spendid and there are strong emotions as well. And you make a double acrostic seem so easy too. Great work. 5/5.

I love your use of words. Wonderful job. I'm not sure as if I understand the last line. But it works. Well done
5.5
kaila

Okay. This was BEAUTIFUL.

I always find acrostics somewhat difficult to get the flow just right, but you have mastered it beautifully here.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion, and the longing is easily felt by the reader.

You did a wonderful job on this.