Wow, totally a great poem which is written so greatly, i agree with the most of the thoughts and the message in the poem,

a always you have done a great poem, with a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

Wow... that was really amazing.. i could picture this poem in my head and everything goin on! you did really good.. 5/5

Its not my favorite it could be better. but it was still well written and has a good flow to it you used very strong words, it had a good message to it

Aww very cute my favorite stanza was the first: Dark black hair skims the side of my face,
I stand there still and my heart starts to race,
We lay there tonight on a warm red blanket,
My mind knows who I want but heart is still vacant.

that is beautiful hun im going to add this to my favorites

Girl.. just ask the man!! lol.. stop killing yourself over him!!...
.... or maybe you shouldnt because youre creating such beautiful poems!!

Wow this is truely amazing. I love the nice rhymes and the rhythm is great!!!. No flaw in this piece for me :)
5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Oh, man. After reading this poem I want to give you a hug. I think everyone has felt like this lol...of course a part of all of us knows it's not true. I believe we're all destined to find someone, but that's easy for me to say, I've finally found mine. An amazing poem with a shocking, and perfect, ending.

There's one hindi movie named Kuch Kuch hota hai, It's a story of a girl, who falls in love with her best friend ( who is a guy of course) but later she finds out that that guy loves another girl. It happens somehow this way too. They meet someday and that guy says I love you to his best friend. Before that girl had time to say anything, he asked. I've been trying so many times to tell that to her but I just can't. it's too hard. The girl asks to who? And that guy says Tina of course. The tears start to fall on her face but the guy didn't realize it: it was raining. I cry everytime I watch that movie and mostly in that part. This poem reminded me of that. I rly love your poems. Keep up the amazing work. Greatly done! 5/5

Hey,
hunn someone will want you! i am sure of it.
with that said, i really enjoyed reading your poem. it is really great.
nicely penned, good flow, and very emotional.
i was in a situation like this with a guy who was a close friend but i was in love with him..and he asked one of my good friends out. really hurts i know.
anyways, the poem was great! keep it up! =]
--Viola

My mind knows who I want but heart is still vacant.
`Beautiful line .

I want to tell you how I feel, but my mouth keeps stalling,
`Brilliant choice of word. "stalling" (:

I liked it . Unique . It starts out the same as every other love poem, but with brilliant chocie of words :D And then it ends differently . Love it . Leads you on and then knocks you in the face .

Nicely written, darilng .
..__MiNDYY

Sad piece, something I can deffinately relate to, well written and flowed really well.