Invisible

by Kaila   Jul 28, 2007


Today he walked right past me and not even a glance was shot my way.
I see the way he looks at her and I know that look will never be for me.
Even the times when I hate him I want so badly to impress him.
When he hugs her I feel like all the happiness has been sucked out of me.
The look he gives her after saying I love you is a look I'll never receive.
He acts like it's no big deal that every time I see him it crushes me.
I lye in bed for hours thinking about how much I love him and why.
I feel invisible when he looks at me. But I am invisible, always will be.

just kinda how i feel right now...not to great

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    Really good poem!! lots of emotion and tells how u feel! amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwz ive been there b4....but in the end i had him....ask him if he liikes u!! u could be surprised!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I felt like this once. I hated that feeling. You expressed the feeling very well and the flow was absolutely perfect. 5/5

    And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Look i have had this feeling before and i know it sucks. in fact i feel that way right now. Oh well life goes on and . . . . well you know.
    great poem i realy felt it.
    :~)Sam Mayo

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Heartfelt, and it gives that familiar pain that we have all felt before. The words are simple, but plainly protray the pain of a crush that we will never have.

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