Comments : Just for you, I would try.

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Sorry my comment took so long but good poetry should be enjoyed like a fine meal. This was good old home cooking bittersweet passion straight from the heart

  • 12 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was great keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem, I honestly enjoyed the emotion which was portrayed so beautifully sad into this piece I must say it hit the heart. Although I wasn't keen on the structure and how it was written I still loved this poem alot the emotion poured over it and left me kinda stunned to tell you the truth. It seems like it came straight from your heart I'm guessing it's a real thing for you. Well done. ~mel

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