Cool. i like the way it ended.
keep up the good work.

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Wow this is simple and sweet. The rhymes are perfect and the structure is beautiful. I loved the way words strung each other and the repetitive function is clear. 5/5 all the way

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I think you meant "hear". Nonetheless the poem was great.

"Then I am in my bed,
I am not dead.
It was a nightmare"

That was excellently written..very chilling and it really hit a nerve with me..
Great layout!
5/5
*Gem*

Cool that is so creepy and cool. I love it very much. I like how u keep saying It's a nightmare! Its soo neat!

Imagery of this piece is great. Atmosphere is haunting and topic is interesting. Fifth stanza is incredibly written. Flow of this poem is excellent.
The lips that pierce your skin,
I know he will win.
It is a nightmare.
^This is my favorite part of this piece. 5/5