It was a good poem m'dear =) It flowed nicely.. Keep it up.

This poem is good i sugest you keep up the excellent work for i wish to keep reading your poems 5/5

This poem is good i sugest you keep up the excellent work for i wish to keep reading your poems 5/5

This poem is good i sugest you keep up the excellent work for i wish to keep reading your poems 5/5

Good expressionS, lovelY emotioN and finE dealingS..... 5/5

That was bloody amazing :) really really good and the last two lines really set it off!!