POEM~~~~

by TillyMariex   Jul 29, 2007


Theres a thing called love,
Theres a thing called hate,
If you think i want you back,
Well its too late.

You broke my heart,
You tore it into two,
But this time it wont happen,
The fact is i don't need you.

Dreams aren't what they seem,
Reality is the truth,
Happiness is too far away,
Sadness overcomes you.

It takes you by surprise,
A sudden threat that may end your life,
But soon you will realize,
Love just isn't right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautifully well written...

  • 16 years ago

    by AlexTheLion11

    Thanks for the comment. And I can't say that I do lol.
    Great poem, very true. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very true. this poem was perfect the rhyme the plot the words connected perfectly and it all came out very strong this poem will inspire many people who have had this problem great job.
    5/5
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Omg i love this

    Dreams aren't what they seem,
    Reality is the truth,
    Happiness is too far away,
    Sadness overcomes you.

    those are my favorate lines
    it makes the hole poem realy powerfull
    nice job 5/5 =]

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