WOW
omffffffffffffffffffffffffffg
this is such a awesome poem....
but that would be REALLY depressing if it was true....
it sounds kinda real...
sad....well life can be a bit ch sometimes
its hard to get through it
but ....
idk....great poem
5/5

GR3AT poem
hope it isnt true though. . .
just one word to say : WOW!
5/5

Wooooooooooooooo I love it i'm no get me wrong it very said but i love the emotion you put in to it

I LOVE THIS POEM!
I hope that it ist true... what a sad tale of a young womans life...
Being put through so much at such a young age!
But... WOW! Amazing poem with emotion in it.

Danielle
x

Sad n beautifully written..gr8

So sad .. but written well ..
hope it's not true though ..
great work

Ouch, that was a hard poem to get through.
the end... is just wow.. amazing, so much emotion, sadness..
the way the story goes along, is just perfect.
i love, when u say - even angels fall-

great piece
5/5 and more

I have a lump in my throat thats fit to choke me, wow....xp