How wonderful. The idea of integrating Poetry with Creation really appealed to me. Your familiarity with Cosmic knowledge was apparent throughout, and your descriptions were quite elaborate and vivid too. I truly enjoyed reading this piece. It's simply remarkable. Godspeed!

Awh! That's cute!

I love it! It all goes together
and I loveee the first stanza.
It made me smile. :D

Very good, I didn't see anything wrong. keep up the good work! 5/5

This is outstanding- so full of rich images and deep meanings. Excellent rhyme scheme. This poem is very soothing and inspirational, it really lifts one up.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow sir great piece as always I love the rhyme and the flow, it is smoothly done, I enjoy reading your poems , great uses of words and really greatly done poem, i love it
very creative

gene Ross

Excellen Michael, your poem is cent percent awesome and flawless. I wonder how great you are in rhyming it and structuring nicely. Wow this is going to inspire me :)

Aai

Wow, Ive read a few of your works, you are an amazing writer. I hope one day I can write like you! Tell me what you think of mine, it would be greatly appreciated seeing you are so talented! Greta.

You keep you readers engaged! i really liked this line of it
Poems, and quotes around the clock.
this poem has a beautiful flow!
nice job def 5/5

Great poem.
Very inspiring.
Great flow and words.
A pleasure to read.
Take care

Excallent poem. The theme and the rhyme both are magnificent. Very enjoyable to read!

Excellent..to describe it..nicely done..5/5 for it..well if have some time read my piece too..^^

Fantastic

This is what I call Poetry. The words ran so smoothly together and that there is amazing. I feel that this poem will be heard down the road.

I love this poem is so cute

Now thats what i call a great poem! 5/5

As always, great inspiration dear...
keep it up as always.

Wow a-mazing you are an awesome writer i loved this poem...had an awesome flow...you are like one of my favorites...can you give me some tips so i can write like you...well thanks Manda