Hours Under The Moon

by Matthew   Jul 31, 2007


Beating
Heart still beating for the cause
Feeding
Soul still feeding from the loss
Aching
Mind is aching from the rush
Fading
You are fading from my sight
Moving
I am moving lesser from your side
Luring
You are luring me into the night
Crying
Who is crying for me here
Dying
You're dying fast inside my tears

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That's so like deep ....i like it lol sorry i didnt no how else to explain it...

  • 16 years ago

    by collin

    A good write i must say even though you let out a little bit of what is next you follow up with some vivid detail kudos

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    I like this too, youre a brilliant writer i must say! i love the way you repeated the single words on the next line, it made the poem flow well. another great job :)

    Amy x