That was incredibly deep. I loved it. It was so sad . The way it flowed was great, and the way it was worded added to the emotion. IT was great

Well I like the ending of it.. Flow was okay, i really like the 'couplet style' well done.

Just a suggestion to try to add 'feelings' in the poem.

Keep writing.

This poem is so sad. And I feel like strangling that guy. Poor girl. Anyway, this was a nice poem. Very deep, heart-rending and tragic. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Very sad and very good people do do this and alot of the time it isnt noticed very cute 5/5

Wow, this is seriousky a great poem. It even gave me goosebumps. It's really great. 5/5

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