Can't wait forever*
by lexi Jul 31, 2007
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It's been four months and i haven't gotten you out of my mind, not even once. You've been with other girls, and I've been with other guys but i still want to be with you because my love for you is still so real and true. When i see you it gets hard to speak cuz i think of all the old memories and it makes me weak... When i see you coming my way i end up turning and walk the other way |
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16 years ago
It's nice to kno how u felt abt diz boy. When a girl found true love, it's hard to get rid of it when try to move on but never went fast to disappear the feelings and it is always wondering if could start over or wish never happen to end. I totally understand ur poem is abt. You're pretty young and still got long way to go.. Never kno a guy is out there want somebody like u. Your feelings will be stronger when you feeling better and happy. So keep it up!
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16 years ago
by Curry
This is an okay poem. im guessing you are a beginner. so i have some suggestions for you.maybe putting your poems into lines instead of paragraphs would help them make more sense. and try to keep the same rhyming pattern the whole poem. im sure you will become a great writer if you keep on practicing!!!! :]
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16 years ago
by Brittany
Lexi,
i like your poem alot.
but dont give up.
if you like him that much,
then dont let go...
true love waits.
