Was this right?????????

My heart brakes
for ever it aches
i cant escape
all this pain
for ever ill be
in misery
I'm incomplete
I'm in defeat
my loves gone
my life's done
my eyes hurt
i want her
i love her
i miss her
i need her
i cant forget
i know regret
leaving that place
now nothings the same
i feel so down
i need her around
she fills me up
with love
when i see her
i feel better
i cant have her
he has her
i feel so restless
i cant sleep
if you look into my eyes
will you die
from all my pain
I'm not OK
my worlds upside down
i hate this town
i need to escape
from all my mistakes
my heart has been broken
and now I'm choking
on by blood
it feels so good
my time is near
I'm full of fear
my heart has stopped
I'm no longer alive
was this right
was this right?????????