Hurting

by Corey Smith   Aug 1, 2007


It's a lot of things that can take an impact on a person all at one time
the thing is to make the truthful decision because mistakes can effect
you i haven't been truly happy these last few years im so hurt im so confused i get down
when i think about the good things that could've happend to me but
they didn't im down from being alone it's a sad thing to know that your not loved
when i get emotional i think about the things that i hurt from my mind
just comes up with a ball of thoughts they hurt to know so i just cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyNlove

    Awwwwwww... this is really good. you should check out some of my poems. and comment them

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Awww...this made me cry too as I read it because it is exactly how I feel right now.

    It's a good emotional write but it's not a poem. Well not structured as one. If you put it into stanzas then it would be better.

    Anyway..take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corey Smith

    I cried when i wrote this

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