A broken heart...

by Nicole   Aug 1, 2007


Its the story of a broken heart
were together
then apart...
now time has passed yet i feel no different to how i did back then.

the only thing thats changed is that you've moved on...
your back with your ex, i saw that coming..

A friend of mine asked me out...but i cant bare to hurt him when i compare him to you and know that its not going to work...so i wont talk to him right now...at least until things are clear.

Everything has gone back to painful, but at least i heard the truth from someone even if it wasn't from you.
You were supposed to be there for me...but it feels like the distance has grown once again

i changed...because u tried to change me
i let my defenses down... because of you
i let myself become blinded by love....just to have it thrown up in my face.

Continue to treat me as you will...for i will not disappear
what once was whole now is not there is still part missing for it still belongs to you
and it is that part that cause me constant unwavering thoughts of you throughout the day it is also the part causing me to miss you when i don't get to talk to you.
i miss you period but i know that things are different yet again and you will not always be there like you told me once.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    Wow I could 100% relate to this poem and so completely understood the character's emotions and how hurt a betrayal can feel.

    "i changed...because u tried to change me
    i let my defenses down... because of you
    i let myself become blinded by love....just to have it thrown up in my face"

    These three lines were simple and effective...to me they summed up the feeling of the poem. Brilliant work! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    The ending was great.
    A great, emotional piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. that was amazing .. beautiful piece of work.. gotta say that was the best i read today.. keep it up.. a nice start and a better ending ..
    Great One..

    Keep it up..

    ~Wake~