I told u

by more den just a broken smile   Aug 1, 2007


I told u i'd b there for u
When anything goes wrong
I don't understand u
Wer are u gone?
On the day u wer down
I brought u up
I turned ur frown right around
I made u see how great u were
There I was strong nd helping u carry on
Now its been so long since we've talked even walked together
4ever I taught we'd b friends

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

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    by Shokry Al Qubati

    It's very nice, I like it :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very short poem yet so meaningful and touching and well written...keep it up...
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  • 16 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Hey. This has a really good theme to it, and it flowed well. I enjoyed it. Thanx for commenting on my poem.
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