Borrowed time

by ECILA ice   Aug 2, 2007


Pull me up from down under
Take me away from this secluded place
Let me escape from here
Free me even for awhile...

Lift me up
Let me kiss the sky
Let me feel heaven for awhile

Allow me to savor this very moment
Cherish the sweetness it offers
Taste the nectar of this blissful time...
While you're still with me

Coz I know at any minute
You'll be gone again, Away from me
Walking back into her arms

And again, I'll be left alone
Back into my abandoned world
Waiting for you from so far down
Waiting for another borrowed time..

**a girl who's secretly inlove with her guy friend who happens to be inlove with someone else.And she cherish every moment that he's with her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    Very heartbreaking, but nicely written.
    I'ts a good poem, the only thing i didn't like about it was that your using the word "coz".
    "Because" sounds better and for the flow of the write it's a better suiting. "Coz" kinda distracted me.
    Other then that i really enjoyed reading it :)

    4/5

    xo angelique

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautiful poem, i can relate to this one.. i loved how you worded it and everthing. Great work 5/5
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I cn relate to this poem its sad and beautiful that we know not everything turns out the way it should
    but finding what you believe to be you true love and then seeing them walk back into the same persons arms over and over again it hurts
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by yoyi

    Omg i love this poem is so cutee

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    I know how it feels to love a male frien and he with someone else, i live it every day its not fair but sometime it just means there is someone better for us out there, just a matter of waiting, and im still waiting,, but i love the poem 5/5

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