Borrowed time

Very heartbreaking, but nicely written.
I'ts a good poem, the only thing i didn't like about it was that your using the word "coz".
"Because" sounds better and for the flow of the write it's a better suiting. "Coz" kinda distracted me.
Other then that i really enjoyed reading it :)

4/5

xo angelique

Beautiful poem, i can relate to this one.. i loved how you worded it and everthing. Great work 5/5
xx

I cn relate to this poem its sad and beautiful that we know not everything turns out the way it should
but finding what you believe to be you true love and then seeing them walk back into the same persons arms over and over again it hurts
5/5

Omg i love this poem is so cutee

I know how it feels to love a male frien and he with someone else, i live it every day its not fair but sometime it just means there is someone better for us out there, just a matter of waiting, and im still waiting,, but i love the poem 5/5