Awesome poem, and i'm really sorry about your friend, and i'm here if you need to talk. Shanik

Well it's a good poem I can feel that this poem is really important to you..

You have some minor errors though :)

Its so (weired)
= Weird

i thought (id) see you again
= I'd

And capitalize all the I's =)

Keep writing ^_^

I'm sorry if there is alot of speelling erroes.. i dont raly mind in this poem tho i just wanted to get it out there to show everybody how much he means to me.

N yeah it didnt matter at all. coz i could feel the strong emotions of this poem. i could really feel what u feel.
well at last just wishin that everythin will be just fine at last. n yeah the best for ya for surez.
nice poem btw. keep the good work. 5/5

I am so sorry that this happened to you! but this is a great poem! 5/5

I am so sorry that this happened to you! but this is a great poem! 5/5

I am so sorry that this happened to you! but this is a great poem! 5/5

I am so sorry that this happened to you! but this is a great poem! 5/5

That was beautiful i loved it, u writen and sumed all your feelings up so well, im sorry for your loss tho hunni, its horrible when you lose someone so close to your heart.

Luv for Katy xx

Thank you everyone for commenting. it means alot to me.

This poem was very very good i find myself looking back at the friend I lost not too long ago, just one thing in it i didnt like that much because prayer does work dont lose faith
God Bless,
Collin

Hello.. in my poem it says "prayers dont always work now do they".. this does not meen i do not have faith or belive in god. its just thta it dosent seem fair and i miss him terribly.

This is so sad i carnt belive this happend to you i am very sorry and the poem is brillant 5/5

Wow, it's a completely amazing poem. Great emotion in it. i'm so sorry this is happened to you. If you ever need someone to talk to, i'm always here for you. 5/5

yours always
oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

It's really touching...I believe such emotions make
us stronger to go on overcoming a loss...
and overcoming doesnt mean forgetting

Great poem.so full of emotion.Im sorry this happened to you.im hear if you want to talk.
Kelsie

Beautiful poem, probably the most emotion filled of all I've read so far, I hope you're ok and manage to overcome what you're going through.

Dave.

Truely Amazing! straight from the heart 5/5

Hey kristen here this poem is great it kind of cheered me up a little, because my little cousin who was but 6 months when this happened but 7 months when he died.
my cousin christina the mother of this little boy killed her own son by burning him in his baby bed with her liter. this happened in iberia, misouri at her little sisters house. so this poem kind of cheered me up a little bit, he died on my moms birthday of this year. july 31 .

Very buetiful