The News

by Steve_G   Apr 27, 2004


When she told me the news
I knew that that was that
My hands starting shaking
My life was disintergrating
But i could not help that

I knew that this was coming
Please dont ask me how
When she told me how things were
I just sat and cried
It felt to me deep, deep down inside
That i had just had the news
That my very best friend had died

~i wrote this after my ex had just dumped me~
~please comment on this poem, it would mean a lot to me~

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great piece of writing for sure... can definnitely relate to that someone-just-died feeling that comes with a break up

  • 20 years ago

    by Kari

    this is a very good poem keep up the good work. sorry bout your ex. :(

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    iM SORRY YOUR GIRL LEFT YOU BUT I'M SURE YOU WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO WILL BRING BACK THAT LOVE IN YOUR LIFE. GREAT POEM AND I GIVE IT A 5. IF YOU GET A CHANCE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF MINE. GREAT JOB. =)