Many emotions pumped up in this poem
well done Sara
keep writing
i love your poems
though i wish i could change the matter

Wow.. loved it .. brilliant work..

deeply expressed.. very well penned. the repetition of the line
" Can you see me now "

just added to the beauty of the poem.. keep it up

Great work

~Wake~

Wow, i personally liked the whole complete person, completing yourself thing. good work

your servant:
david

Wow your amazing! i enjoyed every line =]]. very powerful! i loved it!! =]]

A beautiful poem. When we look at eachother what do we see? A good friend of mine once told me that we can only see what we recognize (the qualities we share), so how much of the other person stays hidden?