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by Alexa Adlesic Aug 5, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
He's the one i cry all night for he's the one who's always at my door I've always been there and promised to stay he was always so worried id go away now I'm the one who worried and crying I'm so broken up i honestly feel like dying I've hurt the man i care so much for all Ive done is cry on the floor i pulled away so things were right but it wasn't enough...we still left with a fight I'm restless and teary eyed but yet he still wont talk but i know he's cried i love my baby with all my heart i hope he believes me and wont tear "us" apart
by jess
I think its great i cant get over all the lovely words
by Courtney
Fantastic. I love the flow of this piece. Very good communication of emotions, and I can relate. There's a little bit of grammatical error, however, no piece can be perfect. Keep writing. % cB