Some of the stanzas seemed scattered and didn't make much sense to me. But of course the words you write are better understood by you because you feel them, I don't. But a good work - it has a meaningful feeling within.

-Lins.

This poem is very unique and the words are quite gripping, I thought the flow was good and the word choice as well. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

I loved this poem
it was written in a way ive never seen before which made me like it even more
5/5 x

Wow, awesome, really passionate, full of emotion, love it 5/5
xxx
keep up the good writing =]

Your words where intense, deep, and captivating.
I could feel the anger, and the pain, with every word.
As Lindsay said 'Some of the stanzas seemed scattered and didn't make much sense to me.' I thought it made the poem stronger, more real, more intense.
I loved it.
It was an amazing poem,
Well done,
Elaine.

Hey, imaginative rhyming,great expression.
You are a gift; stormy skies
Great imagery, Love your style of writing.
Greta

5/5 for the beautiful word choice and the way you have written it. I wonder who have rated this low :?

I like it

Yes....i agree that some of it didn't make sense to ME, but it wouldn't, because I didn't write it. LOL Even poems that others feel they understand, they don't, because each poem, no matter how "general" the subject, still has a personal meaning to each of us. Good job on displaying your own emotions!
Charisma*

This is how i feel some times, and the lines
Fine. Have your silly battles.
What can I do but run?
This is not about me.
I am the one you chose to shun.

really struck home, im sorry.

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