This was a good poem, I liked the beginning, but near the end you lost your flow a tad bit. But it was fantastic in all, you did a great job. I liked what you wrote about, A Perfect Love Story.
You did wonderfully, keep writing, I'm sure to keep reading your work!

It was a good poem.. I wish you made it longer.. Anyway it flowed nicely. I have a suggestion to improve this.. If you want you could split it into stanzas =)

PS. Just a suggestion.

Nonetheless a good read.

Ohh..I thought it was really short and sweet.. The flow was pretty good until the last few lines...But other than that..It was enjoyable read, and the vocab was pretty good..

Overall 5/5...

Wow very beautiful. so precise but conveying huge meaning. The whole poem is very cohesive and how the words strung makes the poem really coherent with its caption. Bothe lexically and poetically strong 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Good poem and nice flow u got there but i can't cope up with the emotion in here though i know it's sweet...keep it up!

I liked that a lot - love reading love poems. They just always make me want to run home and give a big kiss to my hubby! :) Im jealous that I cant seem to write them myself.

Very good - I would say it might flow bit better if you put it into stanzas too but I also like the whole unorganised CLUMP of words sometimes too - just makes it seem less structured and more spontaneous...

Good write.

Mo

I liked this, I found it very sweet and moving.
Imagery portrayed here was beautiful, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader, and the word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable.
I thought the flow seemed a little shaky in a few places, but other than that it was wonderfully written.

Very interesting poem. I like it very much. It is short but still very powerful. Atmosphere that you created with just a few word is excellent. I don't like topic but you wrote this piece greatly. 5/5

I liked the words in this poem :) Very cute indeed. You did lose a bit of your flow in the end but none-the-less it was lovely!

Aww i liked this innocently written peice, it was beautiful to read, and seemed very heatfelt, your flow was really good at th beginning, though after stopping with your rhyming words it became slightly rocky towards the end, but i loved the imagery that the poem held. a great peice.
xx

A Beautiful Start:)

I think you could expand this peice, and make it more precisely 'A Perfect Love Story'.
Spliting it up into stanza's would definitly help.
But it was still and excellent poem.
The flow was flawless,
and the rymthes very cute.

Keep it up,
Elaine.

Thats like a dream come true for me.....to get out of this place and be hand in hand with my lover....Excellent poem...what a beautiful picture you've created!

"No words need to be told,
No emotions need to be displayed.
Silence is telling everything there needs to be said."

Now, that's refreshing. Though tersely expressed, the poem itself have encompassed so much intangible things already. Its simplicity further endears the poem to me. I could easily relate to it, most especially to the aforementioned lines. Hardly any poems within this week have captured my heart than this. Thanks for the opportunity.

I, too, feel that it needs to be expanded with more coherent details. It seems to me to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. But then, again... it's pretty neat and nice on it's own at its current structure and substance. A joy to read such a perfect love story. All the best.

Hey! me! :D question...how do u get sooooo many comments? i have NONE!...apperently, i dont write good...lol. but VERY nice poem...see? u can write love poems! lol. love u PBFL! 5/5!

Awwww soo sweet!!! made me smile...:D
great stuff 5/5
love n hugs!!! ali x