Oh i like this poem its so sweet
Then you shall still remain my poem,
but with different words,
more fantastic than the words before.
i really liked that stanza this poem is a 5/5 the flow was great this was beautiful!

Great poem
you wrote this awesomely
i agree with rose
that stanza was awesome
though there is kinda a sad touch to this poem
but it is also happy also
great job

Keenan

Wow you can sure write Alissa the choice of wors is amazing...good job

ashleigh

That was really good, I find it sort of hard to write unless it is personal experiance, that was great, I think If i hadn't known about where the inspiration for this came for before I read it I would have liked it better, but It was still great. Good work

Wow great, very beautiful word choice and awesome flow. The structure is beautiful and the wole poem is very cohesive :) 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Wow realy don't know to describe it. I hate reading long poems yet i really did enjoy this one... it was awesome the desciption of words, vocab, the flow and the emotions as in it was wow!! Great job, keep it up

Mmm so sweet :) This is something so different! In very good way. Every line was so beautiful, and flow was great. Also, it was very deep and makes it somehow also powerful for me.Which is great! Only good words :)
Keep on writing 5/5!

Your word choice was amazing :)
Nice flow and an excellent poem overall! 5/5

--Lins.

AMAZING.. absolutely amazing.. brilliantly penned and a superbly expressed piece of art !

Loved it

keep it up

~Wake~

This actually gave me goosebumps, it was absolutely beautiful, the whole poem flowed through until the imagery of death arrived, which i thought ended it fantastically. 5/5 xxx

Woow this is deep. really great!

Very beautiful poem, cohesive and coherent with the captiona nd flowing well. Change "or each vocals sang" sang to sung. I loved this piece. Keep it going

Fsams

Wow.
that simply astonished me, normally i don't really like love poems very much, cause they usually sound very cheesy and forced, but this was absolutely gorgeous. i added it to my fav's
the flow was perfect, the words and the rythm were beautiful.
5/5
gabriella

Good poem...i've said before that nonrhyming poems dont really interest me but this one does...i really like it.
5/5

You are as a poem to me
that I memorize word for word,
that I reread until the morning arrives.
^this is the greatest stanza.
This poem is beautifully written. It is long but interesting. Atmosphere is very original. 5/5

Wow i really like this it had a lot of emotion and i can really understand wat your tryin to say in every word that i read! Great PEN your a great poet...keep it up dont stop writting!

That is crazy different... maybe you would like my style check out my poems ..."I WISH*"

It was different, sad and sweet all in one, and you did a wonderful job.
i loved the way it was so interesting and youd think it would put you off being so long but it didnt.
love Tara-Kay
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I loved this poem! It was amazingly written. I enjoyed the style! The emotion was really powerful. Keep up the amazing work!