I liked this poem alot, the dedication was sweetly sad mixed together with strong emotions. Each line was simple yet really effecitve. I found this poem to be strongly placed together with the raw emotions. Well done on creating a nicely written piece of poetry. ~mel
My brother was in Iraq for 13 months and I thank people who do care and show their appreciation for people in the war. Thank god he came back okay but he ended breaking his leg in three places! so thank you!