This is an absolutely amazing sad poem. I couldnt stop reading it. It hows how much pain is felt when a loved one dies while at war.
This is a truely amazing poem. it deserves more then a 5.

Kalee

This, to my perception, is a great poem. I can feel intense emotion flow through it. But as I glance through stanzas(the second time I read it), I think saw some spelling errors. But still, it was a great sad poem. Well done. 5/5

This poem is truly fantastic in so many ways, I loved the flow and the imagery I thought they were both amazing. I also thought the way you used the words " one way road" was rather unique and interesting. Fantastic job 5/5 GG23

Wow, this poem is so powerful. Every stanza is excellently written, and the whole piece is very emotional and deep, I like it from the beginning to the end. The choice of words is great, and the flow of the whole poem is very good, too.
My favorite stanza is:
-As the shadow that was once his soul,
Walks down the narrow, one way road,
Her eyes are full of so many tears,
Her heart full of so many fears,
The war that seemed so far from here,
That war has come too far, too near.-

Truly great job, 5/5 from me.

A touching peice. 4/5 Seemed to drag on a bit too long, maybe a bit repetitive, but that's just me.

Wow...sorry but your poem is breathtaking, it captures the scenes of war so well, the emotion. i liked this although it was slightly depressing. welld one keep up the good work.

Gripping amazingly gripping it pulls me in I can hear the foot steps I cna picture one mans life being taken away while the tears hit the floor great job

-- you can read any of mine the new one is good i think though---

Topic is good and message of this poem is great too. I think that this piece is more about life than sad poem. You wrote it superbly. Emotions are excellently expressed and it is really touching. It deserves 5/5

Good poem. i would sugest a little change. i would change screaming and dreaming to screams and dreams. other wise pretty good

I really like this poem ALOT. i can kinda relate...you are a VERY talented writer...you can feel the emotions you put in your writing. GREAT JOB! 5/5 ttyl

BabyGurl