Comments : You make me sick

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome poem good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I have written many poems like this. people think were crazy just because were different. people beat us down because to them we are foreign. but just because were different doesnt mean we wont feel it when they stab us. excellent poem.
    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by LostInTheMoment

    I love this poem it really shows the dark side of life! =) <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    I liked this poem alot. great job. its not like anything i have read before and i love that! great job! read some of mine ifya can!

    mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Wow, that is deep and dark, but a very awesome poem, keep up the good work, hun. 5/5 <3

  • 14 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    God i love the ending to this. Hell yes.

    --HollywoodSmile ((yes, me again. answer your phone, lol))