Comments : Family ties

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Its good that I was able to find one of your latest. So anyway, a good poem indeed. But I was expecting more but still a good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was a very good poem, well written and full of deep emotions , choice of words was great , I loved it , great job , your friend Tracy d..............5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Great poem, very sad. Imagnery was so amazing and also loved the wording. I really admire how deep you can write!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Thisis a good poem....you sure do know how to put thoughts and emotions so flawlessly into a poem and creat something magnificent:D
    so all in all a wonderful piece:D
    tk care
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Mo
    What a excellent piece you have penned. Very deep and intense. Imagery is awesome.

    And yet you come back to me
    My heart of stone bleeds once more
    and the flutter makes me realise its not dead
    Just as we are not dead
    You were forgiven before you even asked.

    Love your ending.
    Take Care Cindy