Stars on a romantic night

by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx   Aug 8, 2007


Cant believe this is happening
happening to me
who in this world would think
it would ever be.

your hand in mine
the feel of your kiss
your love i would
surely miss

like water in a lake
sun in the sky
this is the perfect place
for you and i

obsticles to face
we will be together
issue to overcome
we will be forever

go out on a
romantic night
look at the stars
what a beautiful sight

stars
beach
you
me

nothing could ruin
this perfect night
we'll be together
forever, that's right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    Okay I was about to do something similar to the comment above but... I think that might annoy you to have more than one of those.
    This was a beautiful poem.
    There was amazing flow
    and the words didn't seem forced
    i wishe there were more people whjo could write like you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Omg this is soooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!! it made me cry!!!!! its its.... well PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 90/90

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