The Big Question []Edited[]

by NightKeeper   Aug 9, 2007


I must confess
I am impressed
With you
No one could compare
To the complete and utter despair
I would feel if I lost you
You are my heart and soul
So I make it my goal
To tell you everyday I love you
Without you by my side
I would of died
Because I can't live without you
Will you marry me?

Ok this is written to know one I know. I was just writting whatever came to mind. I write random stuff. I added the last line because I though it worked well with the poem itself...Feel free to comment and critic it.

I forgot to add a line between "You are my heart and soul" and "To tell you everyday I love you"....Which was pointed out by a friend. So I fixed it...Now maybe it'd make more since.

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