Comments : Wolves of the night

  • 16 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    I like this. Wolves, in general, are my favorite species of animal. Very symbolic, well written. 5/5 : )

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Wolves are quite beautiful and this write is pretty powerful.... we all need to fight in this world to survive. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by megan

    That was a great poem. i liked the way you talked about the wolves. they are great animals that dont ge the respect they deserve.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A beautiful piece of nature transferred into words! 5/5

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful!
    You did a great job with this challenge, and the fact it's about wolves makes it all the sweeter for me to read =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Bang bang for the wolves..!!

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    This was very well written...and I like the deep meanings that you left within the piece. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by jasmine

    That was an awesome poem. i like the images that come from your writing. well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by herewithme

    I really like this one!

    "Standing tall
    some are small
    courage at heart
    their more than smart."

    good opennning :]

    thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Good poem.
    I like this section:
    "Running through planes
    they play lifes game
    killing to survive
    were all the same."
    I also like how you switched every two lines rhyming to the second and four rhyming.
    I was just very confused on what the last two lines of your poem meant??
    The title was also very catchy.
    peace,
    soffe

  • Cool poem Bro... You have amazing talent and you can write very deferent poems which is superb. This one is unique and powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    I really liked it, it was really good, my fave part was this:

    "Running through planes
    they play lifes game
    killing to survive
    were all the same."

    it was good with the cover but meaning behind it.

  • 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    Ohhhh I loves wolves and you wrote this with great wording Your in talent with words
    Great poem 5/5