The real version of sad endings

by 1A kayla   Aug 9, 2007


For 2 years i looked in his face,
couldn't say a word had no space.
I didn't make a move,
had no groove.
those beautiful blue eyes,
soft lips,
and his personality,
all in one,
and then some.
kinda like a Daisey,
moves with the wind,
yet steady all alone,
so many memories,
all those centuries.
referred to me as a friend,
but in front of friends,
a beautiful girl right down the street.
told nobody how i felt,
and now all i wanna do is belt!!
i liked him sooo much,
yet moved so little.
now,hes gone,
so sad inside,
I always wanna cry.
nobody ever wanted it to be,
but it was there,
i knew it was.
i didn't care what people thought,
all i cared is what i wanted to be.
me and him
we were so close,
but didn't succeed,
until on day ,
he was all gone,
he had to go,
at first he said no,
but his parents made him.
his last moments,with me,
nobody else.
u would think with his best friends,
nope,me.
u would think packing,
nope,with me.
just then it hit me,
he loved me,
and until now i didn't even notice it until now when he was leaving.
i was madly in love with my next door neighbor!!
and now hes gone....

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  • 16 years ago

    by schylar

    Yea, i really like it

  • 16 years ago

    by pceluvr4hapenes

    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by xXJovanXx

    Good Poem but lacks a feel. Try to break up the parts of a poem, it'll sound nicer. But great expression and vocab,
    4/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by 1A kayla

    Cmon this is cool rite?

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