WOW Cindy , this was an amazing poem of nature and life, you did a wonderful job, great flow and very well written , love the vocabulary ,great write my friend, keep i up , your friend Tracy ,,,, p.s Hope your doing fine , take care,, 5/5

Very sweet and beautiful picture of one of nature's free and glorious miracles....lovely images and emotions in this one!

I love this. The feeling it gave me was so peaceful & serene. Like a breath of fresh air.
Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

What a lovely poem ,left me thinking how nice it good be if only I could fly away and be free.

Beautiful depiction of nature's lovely gift.Loved it.Keep writing.

As i expected, that was nice poem!

Cindy,
What an inspiring little diddy you have here. Ohhh to be as free and delicate as the butterfly. You have absolutely pegged the beautiful life of nature at it best. You my dear have wings as well, and only to have such could one relate to this so much. Absolutely beautiful.

Kay

Cindy dear, this was Beautiful nature poems you penned here, flow well like a river.... "butterfly" i know you have mentions me before...Beautiful done! take care...Love & Peace.

Bert.

I normally hate poetry about nature, but theres something about when you write about it that just makes it seem that much more beautiful, and how people can find joy in the simplest of things, amazing work

Very beautiful write cindy. great description and flow. you have become a talented poet. 5/5

Miss Cindy,

This was, yet again, a stunning success. How wonderful! :) You portrayed your interest of butterflies fabulously well; I was utterly captivated. Then again, Miss Cindy, you are a lovely butterfly yourself, bringing joys to thousands of people, including me. Take care!

Love,
Debbie

No comment 5/5 for it!!well if you the time read my piece too..thanks

Aaww...that was the first sound I made after reading this poem. You've really captured the beauty of a butterfly in the imagery.

This poem is wonderful! i really makes you feel free! really beautiful! Enjoy..~

Nice i love how i can vison it =] b e a u t i f u l

Great poem, keep it up.

So inspiring..but it sounds sad....like this poem was written from the point of view of someone who wants to feel what this butterfly feels...I hope things are going much better for you.Loved the poem-take care