Interesting! Can't say I ever saw anything like this. 5/5

And I mean no offense to females either.

:] made me laugh, which is always a great thing. so two thumbs up :]

Haha that was funny

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Y0 I L0V3 DIS....... IT W4S H3LL4 FUNNY........

Haha ^^ great work 5/5

Haha..good job..i feel bad for you..stupid ugly girl..hope she stops bothering you haha.

Haha, this is kinda harsh but it's funny N u got it very tight! U r good doing that. Should I make a poem abt ugly boys? L:-DL, but I really like this, is just sound pure flow. 10/10 -nessy

Hahaha, do I smell weird al's cousin?
Almost - but I think maybe you're a little more talented. ;)
lol

Great poem.
Very nice done, a funny remix
Really enjoyed reading it ^^
Take care

Lol I find this hilarious not offensive.
Good re-write.
Thumbs up.