Out of Service

by Andrew Morton   Aug 10, 2007


Fiery passion set ablaze
infatuation growing within
living awake, left in a daze
sweet dreams of seduction

between intriguing warmth
through midst of the cold
falling quick into heartache
but too curious to let go

sheltered from the storm
still soaked from the past
always out of service
finally opening up at last

living for a broken heart
loneliness proves boring
falling for the rest of years
better than never searching

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  • 18 years ago

    by Meme

    I liked this poem so much n i enjoyed readin every single word
    great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sheltered from the storm
    still soaked from the past
    always out of service
    finally opening up at last

    ^^ Words cannot describe how much I TRULY enjoyed that stanza....I mean.....I want to say so much about it but its just breath taking and amazing.....

    What a gift you have and I'm so glad I decided to check out your poems...I loved this!!!
    Chelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    Great job. So sad good imagery.

    sheltered from the storm
    still soaked from the past
    always out of service
    finally opening up at last

    I love these lines. Shows a spark of hope.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is just plain awesome!! great job!! 5/5

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