Jesus will never hurt you. His burden is light. =]

Reminds me of a song by Haste the Day, "Stitches"
the emotion you've shown here is incredibly evident my dear!
well done.

...idk how you feel about your poetry reminding me of screamo songs so I'll leave it at that.

I like this poem. the spelling is a little confusing, but the meassege goes through nicely. so just work on your spellin and your poem will be great. good job so keep it up!!

The emotion out into this was seen though out all of this poem...it was beautiful