It was a wonderful poem.. Actually I feel the same way as you.. I really want to be with my love ones.. But she's so far from me now.. and we broke up..

Anyway. Flow was smooth, well done

You are my life,
And my world.
My lasting love for you
Has finally been unfurled.
^^ I really like that stanza

Keep up the good work

This is really good...once again, we seem to have the same train of thought, because this is emotion I completely understand, and feel a lot. I love your poems.

Awe. That was beautiful! Just from reading this i can tell your soul is beautiful!. Another great write. I can totally relate. <3

~A

Well done, nice poem!

5/5 Ingrid