When you feel death is near

by Jack   Aug 11, 2007


When you've had enough
of your life so far
and you cant live on
for its all to hard
its time to go
to a new world
leave everything behind

grab the knife
draw a circle around your heart
find the centre
and end your life.

watch as the blood seeps out
and you fall to the ground
helpless, facing death
you have just committed SuIcIde

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Nameless Poet

    Good poem,, all i gotta say..if ur thinkin about commiting suicide,,,mann dont do that, i lost a friend recently to suicide she may not of thought her family or friends loved her cuz she was living a shitty lifestyle, but we did, and when she past on, it was the hardest thing for me and her family to deal with, so yea, think about that, but if ur not, than nvm and keep up the good work..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hatori

    Jack,
    This was a truly emotional piece of poetry! Your imagery was incredible, and i could understand everything you described. I'm glad you didn't get too gruesome!
    I don't really know what else to say, so I'll end it here ^_^
    Keep it up, 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please rate and comment one of my poems?
    Thanks!