Comments : Sometimes (A Memory)

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    What a beautiful write and one that I don't think anyone can deny they relate to. I've lost several people close to me and those "little things" still rekindle the memories. Nice job in capturing the feelings that swellup!

  • 13 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really deep and good poem. =] 5/5

    amandaxx.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    5/5...i feel this way too

  • 13 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    Very good i love the flow and word choice
    provoke
    (:
    vvery sad i can relatee

  • 13 years ago

    by David

    Great poem.. well written.. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    What beautiful stunning ending! i loved the whole concept of this. i found the opening to be powerful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better. this is amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow, I really loved this peice. The emotion expressed was beautiful The whole overall idea was amazing. You really did a great job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 12 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

  • 12 years ago

    by JanaeNae

    So short and sweet, yet so powerful.
    very well written! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nuh

    Sigh whoa
    man this , i dont know what to say....

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really like this piece, your word choice is excellent and I can really relate, I've tried to capture the whole idea of memories in my work as well but I think your piece has to be one of the best I've read. As a suggestion I'd say break the stanza up between 'of you' and 'but the memories' because I think you have two ideas here that are quite distinct. A really great piece I think it will go on my favourites

    ariana

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Wow this is really good!

  • 12 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    This poem is amazing. i have to say its one of my favorites....great job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cassie

    This ones soo sad but also amazing writing good on ya your awsome poet

  • 12 years ago

    by Milton

    I know how this feels. I'm always trying to tell myself I won't cry a little bit anymore. I don't anymore now though. but before >_> it's nice the way you wrote about the little things that trigger huge emotions of loneliness and heartbreak. I can get that pretty easy too. even now.. but this poem was really nice. good stuff. =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jdawg

    This is truelly amazing. I can relate so well to this poem.
    5/5

    Keep up the great work