Excellent poem. It's true too, to a certain aspect, but the good girls will get the great guys in the end.

Anyway, the flow was flawless and the rhyming was excellent. 5/5

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Aww this is excellent work! but not all blokes are the same you know chin up :)

It was a great poem, I like the title, good job. I think the flow was smooth, keep up the good work. The opening stanza is really good.

Oh my gosh!! this is one of my favorites for sure. it really reminds me of myself and i love it! 5/5

Nice job and I'm sure tons of girls can totally relate to this. Flow was alright and these are my fave lines:
She yurns to be loved,
But has no clue what to do.
She is an abandoned angel,
This much we know is true.
Take care.
~ Lainey

I'm beginning to like these sad poems, haven't read a bad one for awhile. Once again, great job. The first stanza, as soon as I read it, I had to read more. There is only one thing that I think would make it flow better.

Instead "She'll soon find love"
I'd put "She WILL soon find love."

Other than that I loved it. Good job =)

In the last stanza, "yurns" is yearns. Great flow here and wonderful rhymes. I think a lot of girls could relate to this. 5/5

marcella

OMG this poem is so cute, sad and very heatfelt. I can really figure out a picture from this piece. 5/5 no doubt. :)

Tc
Fsams

The flow was perfect, the emotion was powerful, the words were simple enough yet held so much.
This was so sad, so sweet and so true.
5/5
love Tara-Kay
x

This poem is so true. I love the way it was written. This is one of my favorites. I really loved reading this.

-amanda

Omg this poem is great...
u no im on ur side i wanna find that 1 guy who can prove to me that they arent all the same and until that day comes i can also call myself an abandoned angel...
Excellent poem i give it 5/5
xoxo Paddyz Gurl xoxo

Woww this poem is amazingg! i loved it! i agree with tay.. great workk, and i hope this abandoned angel finds someone for her... 5/5 from me, and thank you for the comment

Wow this is a great poem i can really relate to it keep up the good work 5/5
xoxox
Jess

Is that true?

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5/5

This poem is touching, deep and so true. The whole atmosphere in it is so greatly created, the poem sounds so heart-breaking.
My favorite stanza is:

-She yearns to be loved,
But has no clue what to do.
She is an abandoned angel,
This much we know is true.-

The title is very captivating, too.
5/5 from me

Another great poem, feelings nicely portrayed, wel written and the structure's spot on.

5/5 Well done :)

Dave.

It was good but it sounded to forced with the rhyming you need to maybe shorten some lines to make it sound better4/5

I love this poem

I loved this poem! i can totally relate. and i'm pretty sure others can too! nice flow. keep up the great work!