You promised

by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX   Aug 13, 2007


I sat it the corner,
Not waiting to see,
What lay beyond the sight,
Why'd you leave me?

You promised,
You said you cared.
Now, beyond this point,
Life's quite not fair.

I want to be where you are,
To get away from this place.
I don't want to be alone,
Not in this case.

I don't want to feel this pain,
Or remember memories of you.
I can't believe you took your life,
So now, I'll make mine too.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I liked this poem its sad but a good poem 2 read

  • 16 years ago

    by jackie

    I love the way u wrote this...nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    <333 good job. i kno how that feels...well except for the taking life part but you get my point. <333

  • 16 years ago

    by loviin hym

    Great fablous realy good beautiful wonder awsome okay you get the point ride on 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by alexis

    Wow great ending =)