Sweetheart

by John   Aug 13, 2007


There is something about you,
Something, that make my knees weak,
Something, that fills my heart with joy,
Something, that leaves my nothing to speak,

When I look at you, You take my breath away,
I can't take my eyes off of you,
Every night, I dream of you,
You are like...a dream come true,

You are everything to me,
I will wait a lifetime, just to be with you,
You are everything I need,
This is a feeling, a feeling I want to pursue,

When I'm with you,
You leave rose petals flowing through my heart,
There is no one, as beautiful as you,
Will you make me the happiest man in the world, and be my sweetheart?

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  • 16 years ago

    by ASH

    Luv it
    its just tooooo cute lol

  • 18 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Aww that was sooo sweat i liked how you wrote that very romantical i really liked it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Very nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Aww seriously give it to her.

    a suggestion mite be instead of making your knees weak, try something like "you make my heart skip a beat" maybe? idk its catchy in my eyes. she'll love it =]] any gurl would <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    This poem is really good except i dont really like how you use "you" alot. you can find ways of saying things without using "you" all the time.

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