I Got A Curse

Seriously..i dont know where to start..
its a superb poem .. damn touching .. and very relatable..
sense with simple words..

amazing start...

I got a curse that makes me run away
and you have a tendency to ruin my day
don't we make a lovely pair
i think I'm in love and i DONT EVEN CARE..

its really awesome how you out it through ..
i really liked this bit .

my story has a new end
i never meant to hurt my friend
he looks so good today
nothing seems to be turning the same way

it really has a lot to say.. n im jst bloody speechless.. *grrr*

and the end.. oh my gucking fod.. the end..

he still looks good
now i just need to know if i could
i wear my pain on my sleeve
so he knows its scarred

just left me speechless..so damn relatable.. u had an amazing flow thruout the poem to keep it going..
ur just AMAZING..
love it..
DONT YOU EVER STOP WRITING.. lol..

brilliant work.

prop ur head with a stick and raise it high and keep it up.

~Wake~