This is very heart touching, well done.

Thats a very emotional poem, in my eyes neway, I love the ending verse! it was the perfect end for it. Keep it up! ^^ 5/5 from muah! lol from me, lol

Keep up the writing...once again well done

5/5

Sometimes u love someone too much and u end up being heart broken....you have expressed yourself very well,...well done man. 5/5

Awe!! That's like the sweetest thing I hav ever read!! Whoever that person is must be very lucky and extremely special.=)

Very very wonderful poem, it has no rhyming yet very strong words
well done

This is powerful and deeply touching. I like the way you wrote it- straight from the heart, with raw, strong emotions.

That was really deep dude i loved it!.....5/5 :)